14.12.05

Till I Hurt You Again..

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Under the shades of menorah trunks,
She lays restless, awaiting!
Their reminiscent union harks back
In her thoughts, like the quilted grass
Moving spinelessly, to the autumn breeze!
The withered, leaves the tree and
Silently plummets into the iridescent tarn,



Her absent self jolted back
By a hand from behind mollycoddling
Her torso, with as much pain and severity
As the soul that had it felt!



And soon everything is psychedelic!
The severance is lost with the conjoined souls
Insouciant and oblivious of time, levitate
From their cadaver and into a pristine state
Of ecstasy, kissing caressing and making love!



Epoch crossed, even ages lived in this very moment!
As this divine unison and its philharmonic ritual
Seize to exist and slowly the somnolent selves wake up
From this perpetual tyranny and depart in silence!

10 Comments:

Blogger Φ said...

F*word gud.. immaculate work :)

5:08 PM  
Blogger Φ said...

am re-reading it for the sheer esctasy of it. these lines draw excellent imagery

She lays restless, awaiting!
Their reminiscent union harks back
In her thoughts, like the quilted grass
Moving spinelessly, to the autumn breeze!
The withered, leaves the tree and
Silently plummets into the iridescent tarn,


the other char in love making is enigmatic and only the presence is shown..

By a hand from behind mollycoddling
...
As the soul that had it felt!


brilliant.. da vidhu..so exquisite

5:17 PM  
Blogger Demi Goddezz said...

"Seize to exist and slowly the somnolent selves wake up
From this perpetual tyranny and depart in silence!'

awesome work Vidhu...

7:38 AM  
Blogger vidhu said...

Φ, Dem : Thanks a ton :P

9:13 AM  
Blogger Demi Goddezz said...

happy new year Vidhu...have loades of fun;)

9:37 PM  
Blogger vidhu said...

Demi Thank you...to u too!

9:33 AM  
Blogger sharanya said...

daimn! good stuff! really good stuff... and brlliant visualization it brings about.. keep it up!
cheers

7:21 PM  
Blogger vidhu said...

Thank u sharanya...glad to find you here too!!

5:47 PM  
Blogger sophie said...

In the softness of the curly hair,
That surreal drabness which seduces me so,
With all the tenuous strength and juvenile air,
Destiny will compel to bestow...


good work...its awesome..

10:30 PM  
Blogger vidhu said...

@ Sophia: Thank you. Im honord'

9:38 AM  

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