Escaping Osiris
Fear creeps in,
Mind goes blank,
Eyes grow wide,
Lips splinter,
Throat dries,
Heart pounds,
Nerves quiver,
Hands shake,
Body weakens,
Legs tremble,
Soul suffers...
for
I'm closer!
Lying with you,
Breathing your air,
Smelling your scent,
Touching your skin,
Holding your arms,
Escaping this
Mortal sanctum!!
posted by Vidhu Venkat at 4:00 PM
8 Comments:
Nice measure and grinding halt..well done. If you had made each line of those verses a terse one it wud have been more brilliant.. :) xcellent pic as well
@ Φ : Thanx broah!
@ Demi: Glad u liked it!
A beauty.....need i say more?
@ Nomad: Hahaha...thanx!
@ Vidhya: Thank you vidhya for pointing out the errors and for your valuable sugestions :P
i just love the way you put your words and bring out the emotions. superbly written
@ Anonymous: Glad you liked it :))
Very passionate. Nice :)
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